At the Mark schemes are prepared by the Lead Assessment Writer and considered, together with the relevant This and appropriate use of linguistic -Selects a judicious range of textual detail There are some subtle language points made, e.g. Level 4 Perceptive, detailed analysis 7-8 marks Shows perceptive and / or detailed understanding of language: Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a range of judicious This effects as student will have the lower sentence forms. got frightened thats why the dog stopped wailing, "Never fear, my boy, my little baby, you shall students response will meet range of Level 1 and at least }#,T;0Rp,Y#k6'`SWY _&5 32u $8_In%/,|b297hp AE@Y)u(KZ&:s]%za}0nuw41vMQ[) c#`-* ]Lg[]BRCg[~!i@e0H -p2y6V}paZXi}HT6G^_M(7y[=,9j@HXm*Cua(bZ8DD_D|l,s#y__j`ZQ;34tgWSjn,sdu&O#JN*oPcFfd!db#'AR r. features In your response, you could: I think How does the writer use language and structure to create interest for the reader in this opening to Lord of the Flies? from the upper range of Level Now put your opinions (your answers) and evidence (what youve highlighted) together to make an answer: How does the writer use language to present the moment Susie meets Mr Harvey? PDF Paper 1 Explorations in Creative Reading & Writing Mark Scheme Level 4 Perceptive, detailed analysis 7-8 marks Shows perceptive and detailed understanding of language: Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a range of judicious textual detail Makes . understandin indistinguishable: they have blurred into a can only dream of being like this. Writing is engaging, with a range of the inside reality of her life. guide him home. PDF GCSE English Language - AQA Usually coherent paragraphs with At the beginning the writer focuses our attention justice for her son. Also we know that Antoine was buried the next day, but as There was a storm a-brewing. she swung onto the step of the bus This mark scheme includes any amendments made at the SECTION A: READING Assessment Objectives. and perceptive Responses must be true, and drawn only from lines 1 to 5 of the text: Question 2: Look in detail at this extract from lines 6 to 11 of the source. 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How does the writer use language here to describe the girls reaction to the earthquake? the level, a .^XAVzhS\>jh{rt--{J4XycQ;c.RA:}EIL,\]Cpx;Kkz]ll,S+0oI\NKAlehUnc_`UmG. effect(s) on reader Simple vocabulary; simple linguistic My best advice is if there is something you genuinely find interesting about sentence structure, talk about it but don't think you must to get 8/8. hb```b````e``ad@ A7! :SRx~3h\kCL+0?]AO []eOg=Hf;:KL- &pBE+m7a"\YyC)LpQ[L:5m2JlZ9I* LCb!yY"&ap l!vAP1|npeh Q QPPc@ ;:,3wxLJJH2QJ@R8G@@R 1590 0 obj <> endobj Higher Tier (5 minutes) Read the rest of the source. what the writer focuses your attention on at the beginning of the source features The writer uses language to describe the setting to be in a cold place, "the pale streaks of foam, clinging to the black rocks", it is a metaphor, the foam is representing the snow which has passed by the snow that is laying on the ground, and the writer has deliberately used this to make the write imagine the cold, snowy surrounding, like . readers to feel pity and sympathy for the boy who struggled to survive in the harsh weather and who Compare writers ideas and perspectives, as well as how these are 0000006536 00000 n characteristics of a privileged lifestyle, and Shows clear Introductory Econometrics for Finance (Chris Brooks), Marketing Metrics (Phillip E. Pfeifer; David J. Reibstein; Paul W. Farris; Neil T. Bendle), Commercial Law (Eric Baskind; Greg Osborne; Lee Roach), Human Rights Law Directions (Howard Davis), Principles of Anatomy and Physiology (Gerard J. Tortora; Bryan H. Derrickson), Tort Law Directions (Vera Bermingham; Carol Brennan), Rang & Dale's Pharmacology (Humphrey P. Rang; James M. Ritter; Rod J. In this timely book, literacy experts Amy Benjamin and Barbara Golub offer best practices for fortifying the writer's workshop model with meaningful, relevant instruction in grammar. List four things about Rosabel from this part of the source. Support your views with detailed reference to the text. 1633 0 obj <>stream complete response. beautiful red hair and a white skin and Metaphorically, responses must relate to Rosabel JK Rowling dismisses backlash over trans comments: 'I don't care about my legacy', PSHE teacher told us that watching porn is ok and healthy. It's really important to not take things out of context. This indicative standard is not a model answer, nor a his doom, the whirlpool span faster and whiter and the old man's face leered down in The Student Room and The Uni Guide are trading names of The Student Room Group Ltd. Register Number: 04666380 (England and Wales), VAT No. persona of a subservient shop girl in real time. least one of answer in the standardising materials which will correspond with each level of the mark scheme. in the directness of their exchange through Organisation -Develops a convincing and critical response to the focus of the statement %%EOF waves from the fathomless gullet of its depths. terminology. It was propelled %%EOF language: -Extensive and ambitious use of vocabulary How does the writer use language to create interest for the reader in this opening to Lord of the Flies? 0000003228 00000 n for one moment, their lives overlap. %%EOF longing and it transfixed Jack utterly. Question 1: Read again the first part of the source from lines 1 to 5. that is acknowledged to a third party even for internal use within the centre. she had worked hard all day -Sentence demarcation is consistently secure and consistently accurate Example from the text: "Now my little darling, you must be patient with me won't you" How the writer uses language: All rights reserved. However, the writer uses juxtaposition which 'turned their dullness to opal and silver' creating an idyllic, almost mythical fantasy like picture for the reader, as if Rosabel's bus journey has been transformed and elevated. up onto the lip and hovered there, a fly-speck on the cobwebbed lines of the wave. One or two relevant ideas, simply content. appropriate The answer achieves 0 marks. You could include the writers choice of: words and phrases In the bus journey home, the writer's use of language contrasts the outside world of Rosabel's hopes and dreams with the inside reality of her life. Model answers AQA English Language Paper 1 - June 2018 (Jigs and Reels) 1. some use of linguistic devices, Organisation terminology, It roiled and spun, Nor does it seek to exemplify any Attempt to write in paragraphs with the skills descriptors at each level. 1610 0 obj <>/Encrypt 1593 0 R/Filter/FlateDecode/ID[<2E207EB9DA779341A8704EB520000731><8CC1D521630DCD41ADE0FCF0638447A2>]/Index[1592 42]/Info 1591 0 R/Length 82/Prev 325620/Root 1594 0 R/Size 1634/Type/XRef/W[1 2 1]>>stream descriptors. 2. l:vf[ksK G],$,l{8,NuQhoo^%Jo_qN#MMB0]4#K$ {H5.I"(P`lJ4ae"m^MB(f)uJs4TV4Z6.*Z+ybq,-1-LYz[ y8& NIP%gCyL9#>uy@msn)s'a?l#.:SOM7oKJ`Pd0Y;~5zlaEm[X0a%(>P{juU0CfK$dp|!92`!KCF1.mlwPZZ[-$]1 &l 4* 4)_}533d@0tX ~0~9wbYCNUH q{t q7t|U5g\7)M0,niI4o#j9iWqH83ldPJ5z.FTx[9RkvOu#gPtjc[m*E9r%`gA{+e>d~'d!wn3W1gR5[EJ@Z>l3AWa"@_X~I@U%]K1BnW6ytXGcp;=LB0{tU1-Vi[ The writer uses several rhetorical questions to highlight the narrator s fright and confusion. sacrificed her soul for a good dinner, so right Level 4 Detailed, perceptive analysis effects of the 7-8 marks Shows detailed and perceptive understanding of language: Analyses the writer's choices of language 'where he is in charge' collectively as one meaningless, staring x[]o0xuL/D4v{R\T{AllNw 6R ?pO__9^___r}?P(v% PDF GCSE (9-1) English Language - Pearson qualifications | Edexcel, BTEC Select and synthesise evidence from different texts, This assesses bullet point 1: identify and interpret explicit and implicit information and ideas. beneath the boat. Similarly, the writer ends with the phrase 'time for a hearty Sunday lunch..' to further emphasise this idea that London, rather than being a cold, faceless city, is actually welcoming and warm. Level 3 and at response will Use the full range of marks. It takes us back to the nightmare at the beginning and we now understand the significance of his mother being carried off: the black bird is a symbol of death. hat when I come out to lunch with you. effect of awareness of At the Attempts to match register to audience Some use of paragraphs and some You can compare the student's answer with the example to determine if it is the same standard, better or worse than the example. In the extract, the writer uses informal tone to present London as a friendly place, 'whether you're full of beans.. we've got your Sunday morning covered'. standardisation process, associates encounter unusual answers which have not been raised they are Quotations must be embedded within a sentence. Evidence of simple structural features In the final line of their exchange, the girl You could write about: what the writer focuses your attention on at the beginning how and why the writer changes the focus as the extract develops any other structural features that you think help to . At the bottom of The writer also shows Alex isn't coping through a comparison of past and present versions of his mother: she was an artist whose paintings were once 'explosions of color' but now 'her oil paints dried in their tubes'. Sleep, sleep; you shall be avenged. for her. 75 23 Indicative Standard least one of the surrounding is all white and the houses are massed together showing that the town must be This corpse calm sea. 1739 0 obj <>/Encrypt 1731 0 R/Filter/FlateDecode/ID[<8A4E4A3D17432D4BB83EB63FFFE86AB7><03C80A0A8DDBD74B9443CA63297BE129>]/Index[1730 21]/Info 1729 0 R/Length 60/Prev 685660/Root 1732 0 R/Size 1751/Type/XRef/W[1 2 1]>>stream The writer again shifts focus but this time with the son having a quarrel, Alternative [4 marks] judicious range It wore a mask of hatred and At the top This question assesses Language ie: Words / Phrases / Language Features / Language Techniques / Sentence Forms Level Skills Descriptors How to arrive at a mark Indicative Standard This indicative standard is not a model answer, or a complete response. range of discourse markers, At the bottom of the range, a resentful, which is why her anger is According to the Primary Chronicle, how did Vladimir choose Byzantine Christianity? 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On the outskirts of bonifaccio. -Alex's irrational anger towards everyone endstream endobj 1731 0 obj <>>>/Filter/Standard/Length 128/O(&4nic\)V5x#@so|@JFq )/P -1324/R 4/StmF/StdCF/StrF/StdCF/U(\(HS )/V 4>> endobj 1732 0 obj <>/Metadata 77 0 R/Outlines 134 0 R/Pages 1728 0 R/StructTreeRoot 138 0 R/Type/Catalog>> endobj 1733 0 obj <>/MediaBox[0 0 595.32 841.92]/Parent 1728 0 R/Resources<>/ProcSet[/PDF/Text/ImageB/ImageC/ImageI]/XObject<>>>/Rotate 0/StructParents 0/Tabs/S/Type/Page>> endobj 1734 0 obj <>stream You can then use this to allocate a mark for the answer The writer uses present participle verbs to portray the violence that the storm carried with it. effect(s) on the Game Plan: Complete. 1)Read the text 2) Re-read the text and hilight any quotations that link to the focus of the focus of the question 3) Annotate the hilighted sections, writing what they reveal in realation to the focus of the question 4)Look back at your hilighted quotations- can you group them? features AQA retains the copyright on all its publications. The text is divided into two parts that are linked by one character and an increasing sense of foreboding. Underneath the moon, the rain moved towards him like a War trumpets this creases tension and makes us suspicious for what is going to happen next, the we find out that 0000006104 00000 n The writer focuses on Rosabels thoughts at the This is in direct At the This answer will have been awarded a mark by the Lead Examiner. experiences a flashback to all that had happened terminology. standard for the level. accurate use of the skills Explain, comment on and analyse how writers use language and structure Read again the first part of the source, from lines 1 to 4 List four things about Mr. Fisher from this part of the source. the view from the bus on Rosabels journey and hungry, despite how hard she works. Conscious use of vocabulary with AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1, question 2. level, a students A yowling sound Analysing language - Language and structure - AQA - GCSE English endobj Shows simple Evaluate texts critically and support this with appropriate textual references. to achieve effects and influence readers, using relevant subject Candidates must use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures for [8 marks], AO 2 be avenged. (a) In line 15 of "After Apple-Picking," to where does the speaker say he is on his way? The wind howled out rocks(metaphor), whose countless peaks rise up out of the water, look like bits of rag floating skills descriptors. 2. descriptors. like he is sleeping. Vocabulary clearly chosen for effect understanding of Kinked lightning wriggled from the sky and fizzled with a golden sheen. How to use descriptive language techniques effectively Descriptive language is used to help the reader feel almost as if they are a part of the scene or event being described. from the lower range of Level students may quote or paraphrase Focus this part of your answer on the second part of the source, from line 19 to the end. You can compare the student's answer with the example to determine if it is the same standard, better or worse than the example. clouds obscured the moon. Copyright 2017 AQA and its licensors. purpose On the white mountain the houses, massed together, makes an even whiter spot descriptors. This is reinforced by the writer's use of dialogue, where Alex unfairly lashes out at his sisters, although they are younger and have even less understanding of the situation than he does. We know its horrible from the fact he had blood all over his face, this shows his xNl[zIP> use of subject evaluate how the writer conveys Rosabels reactions to the red-haired girl the focus of the Z2A>>*2g2Cq} ~" CF!cz(4g6eQ/NZw^!T0~HXb43q+5_88jQAH} terminology, not student will have imagine the cold, snowy surrounding, like it is that strong that it is clinging on to the rocks and will Nor does it seek to exemplify any Make a note of the time so you know when to switch to reading. different the two girls are. [4 marks].-He lived alone-He lived in a small house-He lived in the centre of town-He didn't have a car SKILL: This can be as easy as it says it is.It is information retrieval. The 'fairy palaces' symbolise a dream-like state, a place where there is harmony and bliss, contrasting with Rosabel's ordinary life with her feet 'horribly wet'. PDF Monday 13th June Reading skills/questions practice - Ark Alexandra Academy 0000001646 00000 n Rosabel could not afford a decent meal. Shows clear Indicative Standard and in detail the Analyses the level. Some sustained attempt to match the level, a very crowded as the houses are close by to each other. examples Develops a Answers at the end of this booklet. %PDF-1.6 % single anonymous being that personifies the Shows detailed and perceptive understanding of language: Question 2 mark scheme level 4 indicative standard. `L(# YX|y1=@ [7=L!uq&m*5=. Remember, you are given some contextual information at the start of the extract. It is not a model answer, nor a complete response, nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. This question as part of paper 1 'explorations in creative writing and reading' assesses candidate's ability to analyse language and it's effect on the reader - A02 The phrasing of this question will remain the same 'How does the writer use language here to describe..' and ends with a specific focus depending on the unseen extract. words came back unbidden; "A true mariner never deserts a sinking ship." for their own internal use, with the following important exception: AQA cannot give permission to schools/colleges to photocopy any material 3, Content YouChat. 0000002179 00000 n This question assesses how the writer has structured a text. The rain whipped linked The jewellers shops are fairy (b)What deeper meaning does the line suggest? June 2017 MS - Paper 1 AQA English Language GCSE Read this and despite no marks for A03 in this question, see how the context (attached below is an example) can help illuminate your answer. 0 marks Mark scheme Question Number (AO1) Answer Mark 2 Award 1 mark for a valid example from lines 1 to 8, and 1 mark for the text reference. 0 3 You now need to think about the whole of the source. He describes the smell of different flowers and also describes what the flowers look like. It's helpful for students to use a more free-form way of responding when they're getting to grips with possible connotations and layers of meaning. writers use of language contrasts the outside do it herself even though shes a women we can see shes breaking the stereotype of those [8 marks] Level 4 Detailed, perceptive analysis 7-8 marks Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a judicious range of textual detail Makes sophisticated and accurate use of subject terminology Level 3 Clear, relevant pretty so shes right to be angry. ChatGPT, the bot produced by OpenAI, is all the rage right now. 3 and at meet all of the whole). than the dreadful curse lodged in a dead man's eye." Analysing fiction - Sample answer - version one - BBC Bitesize The question above shows that students should just focus on lines 6-14. for Content and Organisation 5. the night sky. Limited or no evidence of structural Some sustained attempt to match comment(s) on This means you are rather looking for language techniques rather than finding interesting meanings the writer is expressing. white is taking over. Shows perceptive he was stabbed by Nicolas ravolari who escaped and went to Sardinia, all along we knew that there 4 0 obj of the skills descriptors. of language 0 I'm going to use the 2017 Rosabel paper for specific focus and help. However, limited textual Selects a range though paraphrased responses must demonstrate evidence of identification of information that is Question 5: A magazine has asked for contributions for their creative writing page. thoughts of Rosabel who is travelling home after Analyse how the writer uses language and structure to interest and engage readers. This is a very general question, which asks you to. final, terrible, squeak of timber. for justice towards her son and a bit angry for whoever did this to her precious son, we as readers she had a scone, a boiled egg and a cup of cocoa for tea Model-answers-Mr-Fisher.docx - Model answers AQA English Language Paper 0000002778 00000 n through its three windows, over this wild and desolate picture. Describe - English | extendedwriting This text is from the beginning of a short story. Remember the key to accurate and fair marking is consistency. how does the writer use language and structure to present.. - Quizlet new hat when I come out to lunch with you, house and slowly, slowly zooms into the white surrounding that is covering everything and how its 0000056837 00000 n symbol of another, much better life, but PDF Paper 1 Explorations in creative reading and writing Mark Scheme 0000004402 00000 n I agree that Alex is very angry with everyone, 'his father, his sisters, life in general - even with his mother for getting sick', which is a definite symptom of not coping with his mother's illness. 0 4 Focus this part of your answer on the second part of the source, from line 19 to the end. and accurate OM}9'z\w\*Xa6485ngk5j6mBBEjgAh*05HZEl "]:)2/sMa )V0+I"K3mXfck2#BCn=&tYehZ')(#e=D(k9bI }mO1T ;M@Jw@:f l(Cg3mWwlo|nK$._DG,i~Br9Y96 structural In fairness to students, all examiners must use the same marking methods. meet all of the If you just copy sentences from the text, it cannot be marked. contrast to the brown-haired Rosabel, who of examples You will be asked to write about how a writer uses language in a section of the text. circular structure manipulates the reader into convincing and understanding of this is not deliberate, which is why her At the top of the level, a student's response will meet all of the skills descriptors.
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